To improve our Magazine Advert as part of our ancillary task, myself and Ian decided it best to start anew and make the advert more personal and professional.
Here is an image we used as a basis of our Magazine Advert:
On top of this photograph, we placed our artist's name 'Frank Hamilton' with the font 'Pristina' which has been shown on our Digipak, following the branding of our artist. By using photoshop, we kept the first name 'Frank' in bold, and slightly faded the surname 'Hamilton' in order to create a unique look. We decided to place the artist's name here instead of at the top as it is more central and identifies the artist more clearly.
Here, we then added the name of the album, 'You, Your Cat and Me' directly below the artists name. We positioned it this way, so that the audience are able to clearly distinguish what the album is called and who the artist is. I feel this is effective having the name of the album in a slightly smaller font as it draws the audience in closer wanting to know the name of it, grabbing further recognition and attention.

After adding the name of the album, we then proceeded to add quotes from two different magazines. I feel that using the magazines 'Kerrang' and 'NME' are far more effective than using quotes from bands that we used previously in our first draft. As they are both music magazines, audiences will be more familiar and may also be a part of their readership, enabling them to feel attracted to our artist as he has been recognised by leading music magazines. The star ratings next to the quotes are small, showing that our artist is modest and not boastful, relating to his laid back appearance. The star ratings are high and will therefore appeal highly to those interested in this advert.

After adding the quotes from the music magazines, me and Ian then wanted to focus on the availability of the album. When researching how people buy their music, it was clear that web 2.0 had a huge part to play in the download of tracks. We decided to display that this album as 'Available on iTunes' rather than 'Available in all Music Stores' as our target audience are most likely to use the internet as a source to download their music from. We kept with our original basic template by positioning this information at the bottom of the advert, similar to that of 'Gwen Stefani's' Magazine Advert shown previously.

After the information on the Advert was positioned, I thought we should then focus on the appearance of the advert. We decided to follow the original black and white theme by recuding the colour surrounding the artists face, but keeping his still in colour. To do this, we selected 'Colour focal point' on picasa 3. By doing this, it was easy for us to establish where we wanted the colour, and where and how far the areas of black and white should spread to.

After we had focussed on the colouring of the Advert, we retracted back to the information of the availability of the album and it being on iTunes. Although most of the audience would recognise the programme iTunes, we decided to incorporate it's logo onto our advert in order for audiences to establish where exactly they can access our artist's music. However, you can clearly see that there is a white box surrounding the blue music note, making our product look less professional. In addition to this, I was unhappy with our final colouring and thought the black and white dominated the colour, making it less appealing and more dull in appearance.

To get rid of the obvious white box surrounding the iTunes logo, we had to blur out the white areas on a small scale using a blurring tool on the programme we were using. This made the box less apparent and eventually began to blur itself into the plain background. To overcome my issue with the colouring, we experimented with the different colour tools and brightness. We enhanced the contrast and exposure of the image giving the face a bolder and warmer look, this enhanced the appearance of the artist and I feel it makes him look more appealing to the audience. By boosting the contrast, the blurring of the box surrounding the iTunes logo was made almost invisible and it eventually blended into the shirt Ian is wearing in the photograph.
Overall I am extremely pleased with our final Magazine Advert, I feel it is displayed clearly and relates back to our Digipak through it's use of font. I especially like how within the Digipak, only the artists legs and feet can be seen, whereas this Advert shows only his face, revealing more about the artist himself. For the audiences who view both of these, it allows them to view our artist from different points of view. This being his more serious side, and the Digipak being a more fun and laid back approach. This Magazine Advert also links to our final music video that myself and Ian produced, as within the video, Ian can be seen in several shots lip syncing with only his face and shoulders in shot, wearing exactly what he is wearing in this advert